@stone4 makes an excellent observation. In a writing community we don't show pictures. We make pictures with words. For every picture you showed, you could offer a brilliant scene, described.
Also you mention the bitter cola but don't explain why it was offered.
This piece started off really well. You were very specific about how you felt and your described your experience wonderfully. Then you fell silent and showed us pictures.
It's obvious you can write. We would like to see more of that here.
Thank you.