Hello @victorbch2,
Welcome to The Ink Well. Now that you're here, please have a look around and get to know how our community works. We are all about quality short fiction and engagement!
You can find our community rules at the top of The Ink Well home page. We ask everyone who posts in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other writers' work in the community for every story published.
We often provide feedback to writers who are just getting started. The Ink Well has some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips. For example, we have tips on developing characters in your stories, and integrating action, dialog and narrative.
The Help for the Grammatically Challenged article provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.
We hope you will use these resources to improve your writing.
These resources can help you learn how to include the important elements of fiction in your stories.
Good luck.