RE: That Thirsty Soul — Hive

You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: That Thirsty Soul

yaziris (63)in The Ink Well • 4 years ago

@rayt2, I'd say you could've ended it with "Her body was lying on the bank of the river." Just without the "mutilation" thing.

Would fit better that way than what you just did in my opinion.

4 years ago in The Ink Well by yaziris (63)

$0.00

Sort:

rayt2 (63)Plagiarism and farming 4 years ago