@yaziris Thanks for the suggestion, I have modified that line. I hope it will fit into the plot of the story now.
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@yaziris Thanks for the suggestion, I have modified that line. I hope it will fit into the plot of the story now.
@rayt2, I'd say you could've ended it with "Her body was lying on the bank of the river." Just without the "mutilation" thing.
Would fit better that way than what you just did in my opinion.