Beautiful read!
It feels good to read that Lucrecia renewal finally came.
Her peace, beauty, and everything was renewed.
I don't know if there are mistakes, but at different places, you used HE, HIS. I think it's a typo error but at some points they got me confused but I was able to wrap it all that perhaps they are mistakes.
Nice story line
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Hello 😩😱 thank you for telling me that I am going to review and edit.
Those are the errors that come with using the translator, and no matter how much I review and edit there is always some mistake.
These errors take us away from the 🥴 award.
I'm glad you liked the story, thanks for the comment and valuable feedback. 😘 @zanoz
I did not find the error, if you would be so kind as to point out to me specifically the prayer that confused you, I would be happy to edit it. Thank you @zanoz
I understood the story except for some places you used HE or HIS instead of SHE and HER.
See like this paragraph, I copied it directly from the post. And all the personification there is HE rather than SHE.
There are other places I saw those errors as well but I think anyone would understand it's an error but if you still want to edit you can.
You are a love, it is already edited.
Next time I will contact an editor, if not I will look for you by discord you are already hired. 😜 Thank you very much. @zanoz
😂😂 funny lady. I am always one text away lol.