Lol, I loved the chemistry between the young man and El-Commandante. It was quite humorous.
Also, ever heard of a pronoun?... Haha just kidding I loved the thing you did with the constant use of the name El- Commandante. I laughed every time I read it!
However, I fear that my brain will find it very hard to forget the name El- Commandante now. I might just have to name my first born El- Commandante now.... Thanks :)
Great story bud!
Thank you for your very attentive and enthusiastic comment. I became even more enthusiastic about writing "the man called El-Commandante", especially when you are planning to name your first child El-Commandante. Congratulations, you only need to add Marcos after the name so that it becomes Subcommandante Marcos.
Haha... it's my pleasure. Marco huh?... that's actually a very good idea! We'll see how it goes..