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A good introduction post should tell people who you are, what type of content you will be writing about, and the value you can bring to Hive. This is a very good introduction post

https://peakd.com/hive-174578/@dora381/joining-my-introduction-on-hive#@livinguktaiwan/re-trangbaby-qynfbl

We don't need to know the full details of your family, what your parents do, unless it's a very interesting job and you may blog about it in future, or how many siblings and cousins you have and the best names of your friends. The post is about yourself.