Nice!
Maybe change 'fragmented' interest groups into 'diverse' - I think fragmented sounds a bit negative.. sort of like something should be whole but it's breaking apart.
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Nice!
Maybe change 'fragmented' interest groups into 'diverse' - I think fragmented sounds a bit negative.. sort of like something should be whole but it's breaking apart.
@tipu curate
I had so much to write and this power cut delayed everything. For the first time, because of my daily writing challenge, I had to write from my phone.
When I say fragmented, I was trying to say different interest groups that eventually comes together.
Going to add more meat to this article now and make necessary changes. Thanks for this!
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