ORIGINAL LYRICAL POEM - UNDERNEATH

in Threespeak4 years ago (edited)

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Here is an original lyrical poem written and narrated by me...

Underneath

Underneath this joy and shine, lies a lowly soul
A fervently distressed one... so very distressed...
But however could you know so?
When my joys hath masqueraded the rest.
Do not ever mind my seeming,
For I have been terribly misunderstood.

When you see me proclaim out loud
know that deep within I seat still in silence.
That my heart is not surely out there...
But if indeed you do see me... Know that I have failed in my abstinence.
Do not ever mind my seeming,
For I have been terribly misunderstood.

And If ever I claim to be the happiest,
If this notion depicts in my tone.
Understand that this is far from truth
And that I do so alone.
Do not ever mind my seeming,
For I have been terribly misunderstood.

Even when I move along with the crowd,
do not think I haven't any passions that I seek
And that I do not have my own mind
I have a mind, I am not stupid or feeble, merely only meek.
Do not ever mind my seeming because I have been terribly misunderstood.

And shall I ever claim to have the most love,
that it heavily flows from my heart like a flood.
Realize that this us certainly not my belief
and that I have only simply been disconnected from God.
Do not ever mind my seeming,
For I have been terribly misunderstood.

If I claim to have life
by all the "goodness" I have done.
Know that I have mislead thee...
For in this falsity, I have fled - forever gone...
Do not ever mind my seeming,
For I have been terribly misunderstood.


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Great poem, dark and seething like my soul hahahaha. Your voice is completely different to what I imagined.

Ha! I'd take that as a compliment? xD.
You don't have a Soul though, you ARE Soul


Also, Andy... are you stalking me?...👀
Because this was posted a while back :)

It was a good poem.

I tend to disagree, I think that we incorporate a soul as part of us.

Nope, I don't stalk people. You sent me something yesterday in your comment that made me question who you are, as a matter of safety. So I went looking for your introduction post and found this along the way.

Thank you.

I tend to disagree, I think that we incorporate a soul as part of us.

Well, we can agree to disagree.

You sent me something yesterday in your comment that made me question who you are, as a matter of safety.

Wow. That's a lot. I think I know what I said that triggered you. It was just a joke though. I guess I gotta learn to know when to draw the line when it comes to things, jokes and interactions I say and do here on Hive. I mean this Blockchain is still an online thing and we are all just strangers afterall, so.

Alas, I just can't help but get too personal or sensitive with people at times. What can I say?... I was made different.

Sorry if I caused you any trouble.

Hi Eche

No, don't stress, I just have some stuff going on in my personal life that makes me ask questions of everyone, don't take it personally please, I was just explaining why/how I found your poem. It really wasn't out of me stalking you. There are people intent on hurting me so I'm hypervigilant.

We all say things that may be miscontrued by others (I do it all the time) and like I said, it's a reflection on me more than you. You didn't cause any trouble at all. My apologies if my comment seemed harsh.

Oh I see, I understand. Do take care of yourself though Andy.

And phew, for a second there I thought I horribly offended you😅

My apologies if my comment seemed harsh.

No, no, no , no... Andy. No need to apologize, I'm sorry for making you think you have to be sorry, you're sorry, that I'm sorry, that you're sorry while we both are being sorry in the sorryverse. I'm sorry you're sorry. XD

Lol, I say sorry waaaaayyyyy too much and I know it.

I enjoyed your latest animation vid, that shit cracked me up. Good job bud.

Have a good one :)

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