Love the tune.
Sounds to me like you're already achieving decent quality recordings, just need to spend a little more time on your mix.
Learning post-production on your own music can be daunting... your brain will literally hear things with a different bias just because it is your music. If you know anyone else you could record, so you could practice your mixes with someone else's music, it would very likely accelerate your learning.
Just a little friendly, unsolicited advice.
I love what you're doing, can't wait to hear more!
Cool man, thanks. I have to remember why I'm writing and playing, it's for me essentially, I don't think I'll be headlining Glastonbury anytime soon! So, it's a hobby, but one I'm very enthusiastic about. It's a joy to do, and I share it all, the good and bad. It's lovely to hear that someone likes it though, but I have got caught up before and must always pull myself back and say to myself.. 'get a grip, man, it's music! It's an imagined art..' cheers man for the tip too, I think I'll do that, record a friend and try to mix it/ master it.