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RE: Mr. Bonkers gets a job

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I was thirteen years old when I started my first job

I think it was too early to do a job. It means you have started working from the early age..

When I moved out of home

If you don't mind I wanna know the reason to move out of home.

at four and a half years old, that it was time for him to get a real job.

What!!! It seems impossible but your nephew seems intelligent and business minded.
I am hopeful that he will be a very good businesses in the future and shine in life.

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It's never too early to begin learning lessons that will carry one forward through life.

If you don't mind I wanna know the reason to move out of home.

My mother told me to leave. She was angry with me for something and that was how she dealt with it. She didn't expect me to actually leave, but I did and never went back. The best thing I ever did, although starting out in the world at that young age wasn't easy. I made it work though, and learned many things along the way.

Also, you use the word wanna which is not a word in the English language. The correct ones are, want to. Using the right words will make you seem more intelligent and your writing more interesting. Just a suggestion.

She didn't expect me to actually leave, but I did and never went back.

No mother expects it. I am sure your mother was very sad when you left. Besides, I think it was hard for you to take the decision. And facing so many difficulties at such kind of young age means you were brave.

you use the word wanna which is not a word in the English language. The correct ones are, want to.

wanna= want to, I knew about it but till now I thought "wanna" was also correct. Thank you for correcting me and for giving suggestions. From now I will use the correct one🙂.

No mother expects it. I am sure your mother was very sad when you left. Besides, I think it was hard for you to take the decision.

Without the fact, it's difficult for you to comment on it all I guess. Thanks for trying though.