Ah, Mountain Breeze (Short Story)

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The mountain Breeze meets the forest. [Author Notes at the End.]


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Ah, Mountain Breeze

The mountain breeze awakened.
It took flight.
It howled for the journey.

The mountain breeze met the forest.
It greeted the trees.
It caressed the flowers.
The mountain breeze jumped at joy seeing new roses bloom.

"It's windy today." The lumberjack returned the breeze's greeting.
"We better finish before it rains." His log-carrying friend said.
The mountain breeze whistled as it passed the two.

The river greeted the mountain breeze.
It greeted back. It slowed down to enjoy the view.
The breeze followed the stream down the waterfall.

A cave stood in the way of the breeze.
The mountain breeze accepted the challenge.
It flew in. It whistled, and vibrated through the cave.

The mountain breeze met the sea.
It found its brothers and sisters sweetly sleeping.
The mountain breeze slowly slept. Protected by the stronger wind of the sea.

The End

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Author Notes

This is an entry to Dreemport's August Word-of-the-week challenge. I choose the Element Air / Wind. I started writing the story with just Wind in mind, but I felt it's more appropriate to be about a pleasant Breeze.

It's not a complex story, but I enjoyed writing it. I hope the prose was vivid enough that you had a pleasant time reading it.

What do you think

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For now, I leave you until we meet in another article.

Salam (Peace.)



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Beautiful imagery my friend.

Thanks for reading and your comment. I'm happy it turned out to be beautiful.~

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It was vivid! I understood every line and word. This is beautiful. Well done!

#Dreemerforlife

Thanks for reading and confirming that the story I wrote was vivid as I wanted. These comments really increase my confidence with my writing.

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This is a nice poem about wind @ahmadmanga I love the use of your word and the way you show the love between the forest and the wind
love from #dreemport

While writing it, I didn't mean it to be a Poem, but I like that it turned out like a Poem. I love it when elements of nature are shown to be loving each other, because that's what I feel their harmony is like.

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Well, the truth remain the same .
Your word play is exceptional and the way you write, brilliant.

Thanks for sharing such amazing piece

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I love the mountain breeze. This speaks about love and care even among nature. This is well-written. #dreemport

Thanks for reading, and you're right. I really wanted to convey that elements of nature love and care about each other.

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This was quite beautiful, Ahmadmanga 💗 I loved your personification of the wind... and how it eventually gets the chance to rest in the cover of a stronger force. A lovely entry to dreem-wotw. thank you! !LUV !PIZZA

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Thanks. Having it rest under a stronger wind was my favorite part to write.

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