Oh, this is energising! I'm still pumped from the battle. And what a battle scene. It's almost a symphony, in a way. Highs and lows, poetic then brutal, smooth then harsh. Loved the end, the final defiance. Reminiscent of an opera.
!PIZZA
Oh, this is energising! I'm still pumped from the battle. And what a battle scene. It's almost a symphony, in a way. Highs and lows, poetic then brutal, smooth then harsh. Loved the end, the final defiance. Reminiscent of an opera.
!PIZZA
Hi anikekirsten
It's gratifying to hear that the battle scene had that flow or high to low energy, as I was actively trying to do that to create drama within the context of the military-type stuff (😂 which isn't to everyone's taste).
Also, the ending made me get that little moment where you smile to yourself as the writer and you're like 'Yes' in your mind; catharsis, revenge and all that good stuff for Captain Gream, and all the Greams of this world.
Anyway, I won't continue patting myself on the back 🤣 I'm just glad you enjoyed the series 🙂🌿
!LUV
Sorry, the LUVbot is currently out of LUV!
😂 what a shame, in reality, love is not contingent upon a node or algorithm.
Ah well, I'm off anyway.
Well, this was the first time for this happening! It's back up and running now.