I SEE all of this as if I'm watching it play out before me! hehehehehe I love when you talk to the reader - like you're letting them in on a little secret!!
and i love Ayaan! hahahaha with his common world!!! LOL of course he needs a match (in opposite) for to make his life utterly- UNCOMMON!!
hehehehe this flowed beautifully too - i feel like i'm getting all the back stories naturally - and being tugged along for the bigger picture! hehehehe
its perfect!!! and i'm so excited for part 3!!!!!! hahahahahaha
Thank YOU!!
Now I finally feel ready to tell part three :D
No one of importance is missing!
you tied it all together very nicely and prepared us for what's coming!!!!
Thank You
HUGS!