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RE: when a man falls in love || entry for dreem-wotw

Thanks for your entry to dreem-wotw 🤗Whilst you show us the 3 prompts in your closing sentence, and they do make sense in this context as a summation, I feel that it missed the remit of shining a light on each one individually during the progression of your post. I think Stuart is right, if the piece had been a bit more developed in each of the stages, there would have also been space to allow each of the prompts to shine. Your story does have a great heart to it! ❤️ See you back next year !LUV !ALIVE

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I feel that it missed the remit of shining a light on each one individually during the progression of your post.

You and Stuart are right, I should have develop the characters and let them tell the story. Creative writing does need lots of creativity and hopefully I get to develop that skill this year.

Thank you for your lovely comment

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