This is really perfect in its simplicity and direct approach. I wouldn't change a word. Thank you for sharing a beautiful and sad story which manages to be uplifting and inspirational at the same time as making me tear up a little. Much love - Carl
This is really perfect in its simplicity and direct approach. I wouldn't change a word. Thank you for sharing a beautiful and sad story which manages to be uplifting and inspirational at the same time as making me tear up a little. Much love - Carl
Thanks for your comment! I really appreciate where you said "I wouldn't change a word." I updated my post to mention that a big part of the reason I was inspired to write this story is because I write things like this for work.
It's a new job and new way of writing for me, so I wrote down one of my own stories and posted it here for practice. I did sit there and debate about whether to change words around, or take out the 2nd and 3rd lines especially. It took me way too long to decide whether to leave that part in or not (15 minutes haha don't judge).
So thanks for the kind words. I was definitely hoping it would be uplifting.