Part 5 of the land of younow

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Noble and Hopnotic carried on. Just
before going further along the path
just behind the waterfall, A tavern suddenly
appeared, A tavern within this huge cave
oh my goodness. He looked at the sign,
Jays Tavern, Hmm hopotic we need
to eat drink and then rest, perhaps
travelers within this tavern can give us more
information the dreaded snatching smoke
cloud. Noble proceeded through the door
and there stood the Hostess Ally, who
greated him. Hell Sir may i find you a seat.
He peered over ot antoher table and thier sat
speed and kellie. Hell my friends. have you
heard of the smoke that has been snachthing
up random people within this huge cave.
Oh no as soon as noble asked, speed
and kellie P were also swept up by the smoke.
the servers witin this tavern seemed
not surprised that this was happening.
Elise Maddie,and Carra the servers of
Jays tavern looked at noble and
shrugged their shoulders, Why are
you not surprised. The servers said
that snatching smoke carried off people
but never bothered them. However the
servers did keep records of who in the
land of younow was snatched up.
They gave noble the book to study.
Noble looked with sadness in his eyes
those that had been snatched up by the
smoke were listed. Naughty cobra,
creepytroll,ltafshadow,ltaf moe the mexican,
Noble felt a tap on his shoulder, it was
whitesnke the monk, blessed be said white
you have not been snatched up by the smoke.
No white i have not, do you know why the smoke
is snatching people, white replied::::
while noble waited for an answer, markwuk
appeared with a glass of ale, Nobel
how of you been , very good mark thank
you but this smoke has been carting off people.
Oh no poof and whitesnake the monk was
taken, poof kellie P was taken again.
Noble was at a loss of what to do.
He continued to read the book of
dissapaerences the servers had given him.
further on the list of those that had
dissapered were, errawkaward,
mikayla,ensared,and many others that
noble had visited over time.

He returned the book to the servers
as he made copies on his mechanical
writing device. Maddie one of the servers
brought him a glass of wine.
You look distraught said maddie.
Yes noble said this puff of smoke has taken
many travelers and many of my friends.
and I am at a loss of what to too.
Maddie called one of the other servers
over, the other server Elise brought noble
another glass of wine and a small map.
Elise said Noble many in this tavern
have heard of your valent deeds
this is a small map of one of the travelers
that made it back. Thank you elise
noble said i shall study it.

It gave Noble some hope as this
was from a traveler that had made it back
from being taken. Hmm let me see hoppie.
with that all of sudden the puff of smoke appeared
and now deposited rachel and her family
right beside him. Rachel where have you
been i saw the some take you and your
family and now it has deposited you
within this tavern. Can you tell me about
its intentions, Rachel replied
Swoosh before she could answer the smoke
took her again. Noble was quite confused
by this point. This strange vortex puffed
shape of smoke abducting people
bringing them back and abducting them
again , Noble scratched his head.
His mind was tired and Hoppnotic was
on edge, They rented a room in Jays
tavern from a man name Dustin.
Noble and Hoppnotic tryed to get some rest
till morning light.

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You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:

He peered over ot antoher table and thier sat.
It should be their instead of thier.