Ok, so first thing I am seeing here is there is no cover photo, no greeting jumping into your content and the tags.
- A cover photo is a must. If you are not sure where to get some free stock photos, check out https://pixabay.com/.
- Look at the tags others are using and see what they are about by actually clicking the tag, that will give you an idea of tags to use.
- You gotta make the content be your own, this post seems like you copied and pasted something from somewhere else.
- Take you time and just create good content that you would wanna read? Do you think you would want to read this?
- Don't ask people to check out your blog, show interest in theirs and most will show interest in yours.
- If you are on twitter look through the #HIVE and get involved with the community there.
How did you find your way on hive?
What interface are you using ? peakd.com?