This is a beautiful song, Kay. I love the line
"You were young once
Just life-drunk sober
Always saw honey in the bees"
and your chorus melody is gorgeous. I went on your bandcamp and listened to the studio version of the song too- the stuff you do with backing vocals is really impressive. I expected to hear it with drums and electric guitar for some reason - I got a really strong Evanescence-type vibe from your vocals and songwriting.