I am not interested to make a rebuttel to the points you had mentioned here, I am absolutely fine with your points , your reply to my points I raised but I was just sharing what I felt.
See, the topic was interesting but the way you presented was felt like something totally not in the order or the way you presented it might be little difficult to get the exact way in which you wanted to convey it.
Looks at the first two reply from you, like
It is something I have heard many times in my life. Perhaps it is a saying common to the United Kingdom. It is relevant because the post is about truth and lies.
and
I agree. It is not true that drunk people tell the truth. I think you're perhaps reading too much into it
Doesn't it look totally contradictory with no similarity in between. So when your topic is as serious as mind, heart and brain etc was it better to avoid this alcohol stuff completely, instead just make an introduction just by saying I would like to convey this message through this post etc.
But, the word soul here is meant simply as a person - not a metaphysical object.
I understood this completely that you are referring to a human being, But do you believe that such people always say the truth and it is default set up in one's thought process.
Yes, I said sledgehammer twice. I don't know why that would be a problem?
You could try to use some alternate words and phrases or sentence to make it more appealing to all since you yourself admitting that many people had been pointed it.
Have a good day friend. Thank you
I am not so sure why you seem to have such a huge problem over what seems like something entirely insignificant. I mean, I appreciate the critique, but I am not writing for a Nobel prize here - it's just a spontaneous blog post that spewed out from my mind. I am not that concerned about vocabulary or that the introduction seems less serious than the rest of the post. This is my naked mind and if it displeases you, then that's unfortunate. But, it's not that huge a deal.
Don't take it seriously my buddy, as a Social Media platform and especially in a platform like steemit you are posting anything for other's valuable comments and upvotes. You are obliged to expect good and bad.
I was just sharing what I felt, if you feels that there is something which you could take it personaly take it otherwise leave it...
Anyhow ...Thanks ...Keep writing
Lol.
All good, man.