Eden~ A Poem

[artedellavita]

With a flick of a serpents tongue
Heaven was traded for a chance to sin
I taste the fruit
You taste my fruit
Lips tracing my breasts
Hands lost in your hair
Eyelashes flutter
Like wings on sparrows
Two bodies intoxicated
Two bodies lost
In one another
Hair disheveled
Lipstick where there should be none
Words that should not be spoken
In public
A lifetime lived
Between moans and sheets

Comments

[steempowerpics]

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https://www.adoramapix.com/app/products/photo-books

[artedellavita]

Thanks for the tip friend! I’m going to dust off my canon and start taking pics again! Once they are better quality I just might take your advice!

[herverisson]

Those curves have no doubt choked up more people on Steemit now than all the pythons of India... but i can't resist adding my grain of sand, by adding some lines from Flaubert's SALAMMBO because it reminded me of the chapter called "The Serpent" :

The heavy tapestry trembled, and the python’s head appeared above the cord that supported it. The serpent descended slowly like a drop of water flowing along a wall, crawled among the scattered stuffs, and then, gluing its tail to the ground, rose perfectly erect; and his eyes, more brilliant than carbuncles, darted upon Salammbô.

A horror of cold, or perhaps a feeling of shame, at first made her hesitate. But she recalled Schahabarim’s orders and advanced; the python turned downwards, and resting the centre of its body upon the nape of her neck, allowed its head and tail to hang like a broken necklace with both ends trailing to the ground. Salammbô rolled it around her sides, under her arms and between her knees; then taking it by the jaw she brought the little triangular mouth to the edge of her teeth, and half shutting her eyes, threw herself back beneath the rays of the moon. The white light seemed to envelop her in a silver mist, the prints of her humid steps shone upon the flag-stones, stars quivered in the depth of the water; it tightened upon her its black rings that were spotted with scales of gold. Salammbô panted beneath the excessive weight, her loins yielded, she felt herself dying, and with the tip of its tail the serpent gently beat her thigh; then the music becoming still it fell off again.

[artedellavita]

Oh wow! Thank you ever so much for sharing this with me!

[bleedpoet]

Mmmm... rib😉 Lipstick where it shouldn't be makes me think it's on the sheets and now we have to clean the sheets, this messy love making is costing us a fortune in detergent😄

[artedellavita]

That's when my energy efficient washer kicks in lol

[tarotbyfergus]

Love:)

[artedellavita]

Love right back friend⭐️

[mother2chicks]

Lots of eye candy with this one dear friend😉 I love the first two lines of the poem, sets it all up wonderfully. 🐓

[artedellavita]

Merci mon ami! Googley is thinking of dressing (?) like Eve for Halloween. Gross lol

[syitah]

very good words and a very clear mind and a good post I really like it I am amazed once read it @artedellavita

[artedellavita]

Aww, I very much appreciate this thank you!

[syitah]

Yes, you are welcome

[cecicastor]

Great poem and I love the photo!

[artedellavita]

Thank you sweetest friend!

[rajaduttablogs]

Deep and lovely poem. I really liked this one. Your words are beautiful. Thank you for sharing..Poems of erotic fantasises...

Maam your Banner says all content & images are your original work ask before borrowing..So actually I liked the poem and I want to share the same with my girl so may I ?

[artedellavita]

If you want to share just hit the resteem button friend :)

[rajaduttablogs]

Done resteemed maam !

[johanreporg]

@artedellavita I love this phrase ''Two bodies lost
In one another''.