We are treading in clouds in our modest desires, disciplined conquering the peaks of freedom through the thought fractions.
This is my favorite line because it speaks to the human desire to achieve. I like what it has to say about the modesty of these achievements and how they are done with discipline. I also like that it speaks to Freedom. For me the thought fractions are the Poetry we are creating in our poetry class, because if you actually think about it a poem is a thought fraction.
I always glean some spiritual knowledge from your pieces and really enjoy reading them. I sometimes think your poems say more to me than your prose, although both are powerful.
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