The Desire Of Your Love

in #poetry6 years ago
  • Everyone has his past, feelings, and victories. We are proud of the new relationships that we create with your love, we are trying to do impossible in your embrace. You give us the space to create the fantasy of the new world, you are a special memory opportunity.

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  • We come up with new solutions that lead us to magical eyes, you are a star that shines for our love. We are treading in clouds in our modest desires, disciplined conquering the peaks of freedom through the thought fractions. We have a new nomination of natural beauty, you have become an example to the whole world.

  • We are not perfect, but with you, we have the chance to be the leaders of the next generation of fine communication.
    There is a way to get infinite time from higher levels of consciousness, wake me up. Conquer us with the best moves, draw our roads without tears.

  • Washing our hands with the wrong things, you are the source of the greatest blessings, the purest energy that comes from the heart. I'm looking for you in the open air of the open chakras, cover me with dreams, while I dream of your kisses.


Original poetry written by @dobartim
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We come up with new solutions that lead us to magical eyes, you are a star that shines for our love.

Such lovely words, I am always there listening to you in the class I just love the wise words from you.
Keep going sir we always support you.

@whack.science is the secret word.

We win only Together.

It's not secret anymore hahaha :D

Love and desire, the resources and power of life,
but be careful with these. Don't dig the death hole coz too early to believe in both. Thanks for
the poem ❤️

Thank you very much

how can few men know the knowledge borne for many
how can the rivers know the water bourne by sea
how has the watre of the ocean found there way into the rivers of the land
and rivers dont know the truth of their birth

winding throught the plains not knowing its origin
winding throught the plains and not knwing its own path
coursing withuot knowledge of its own future and knowig its course to th sea
how have the waters falling from the falls have taken the plunge on faith
The plunging rivers and foaming falls and then a quite path
down to basin and seemingly quite on the top

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seems it comes direct from heart..

the lines are really touchy..

get just into inside the heart...

Thank you very much, see you on the top

thank you sir! you are our inspiration!

Well done, creativity I liked your words .. Thanks for the tips we just need a little will Thanks for sharing

Yeah, see you on Steem Schools

quoteWashing our hands with the wrong things, you are the source of the greatest blessings, the purest energy that comes from the heart. I'm looking for you in the open air of the open chakras, cover me with dreams, while I dream of your kisses

easy to understand and very beautiful words sir...!

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Bellisima, saludos poeta mis respetos para usted y su musa, Dios lo siga bendiciendo.

Thank you very much

True talk sir. I upvote, resteem and follow you. Thanks a lot

See you on the top

We are treading in clouds in our modest desires, disciplined conquering the peaks of freedom through the thought fractions.

This is my favorite line because it speaks to the human desire to achieve. I like what it has to say about the modesty of these achievements and how they are done with discipline. I also like that it speaks to Freedom. For me the thought fractions are the Poetry we are creating in our poetry class, because if you actually think about it a poem is a thought fraction.

I always glean some spiritual knowledge from your pieces and really enjoy reading them. I sometimes think your poems say more to me than your prose, although both are powerful.

Wackscience

Verybig and great post because its full of poetry and i love poetry