I like the playfulness of this poem, and how it starts with roses are red and violets are blue and then basically goes on to a more profound meaning from there. I like the use of the symbolism of the sea bed. I also like the visual aspect of all the line breaks getting progressively longer as the poem goes on and becomes more meaningful. Good job.
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I felt I had to start with something simple yet easy to relate with. After all, the first poem I ever wrote was one of "Roses are red, violets are blue." Kind of poetic justice to use it to explain my love for poetry.
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