Short Poem - Moving Makes Me Happy. Dedicated to Someone I know.

in #poetry6 years ago

I have been working on writing some simple poetry lately. I do it for those whom I think will appreciate it. It makes me feel good when I make someone happy by doing little things like this.

Today that person will know who she is because I am using one of the pictures in a previous post of hers. I was looking through her work and spotted this post I hadn't read. It inspired me to jot down the following poem. I hope she doesn't mind.


It's not like I want to be moving
It's not like I want to go pack
I just feel like I will be proving
Something I feel that I lack

I really don't like to conform
It makes me want to be sick
So I go outside of the norm
That feeling is what makes me tick

If having success is a good thing
I also must constantly know
That I can handle a downswing
Only when I'm on the go

I expect I'm going to be dying
To hurry up and depart
It's not like I am trying
To always get a fresh start

But this is what gets me excited
Adventures to places that's new
And it'll make me delighted
To share my travels with you

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This is such a beautiful poem! You should really post more of your poetry, I always love reading it :)

Thanks so much! This is the first one I have done on it's own post instead of in the comments. I will do some more later when I am inspired.

I found it my self, but thanks for tagging😂 i usually dont like people borrowing my pics but because the poem is great i make exception! I love it!

I'm so sorry for not asking permission. I did the poem late last night and put the picture in there so you would know what post I was referring too. I won't do that again.

Haha it’s okay. Just ask next time 😁 but it is fine piece from you! Thanks:)

Thanks. I will, for sure. I guess I wanted to surprise you. I suck at surprises.

Naah you dont! I loved it! 💜

I am SO glad you liked it. Thanks alot.🙂

You should tag her so she sees this. But did you ask her if you can borrow the picture? I don't allow anyone to use my pictures, and I think she might feel the same. But the poem is great, like yours always are!

How do I tag her?

is she tagged now?

She will see that I mentioned her and check back :)

Thanks for schooling me on this. Putting this in the memory banks.

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