Enthalpy/Original poem [100 Days poetry challenge (Day 43)]

[corderosiete]

Enthalpy

We walk to the same place,
your steps,
my steps
they join in unison
in the reflection of the sun.
From the enthalpy of your skin
emerges
salty fractions,
and a submissive smell
by Thierry Mugler.
Free the energy
that illuminates the eyes
tired of insomnia
for one night
with xenon lights

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Poetry written for (100 Day Poetry Challenge) organized by @d-pend made for Steemit

[Day 43/100]
4/18/18

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Original by @corderosiete

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Comments

[adebayopaul]

My friend, tis been a long time. You know anytime I see the word "Enthalpy", the first thing that comes to mind is heat, you just made a whole new meaning for me. Thank you.

[corderosiete]

Yes, the root of the word is from the Greek, it is heat. It is normally used in thermodynamics. Greetings.

[zeleiracordero]

Buena "entalpía". Realmente, no conocía la palabra. Qué bueno que estamos enriqueciendo nuestro léxico, a la par que nos deleitamos con poesía.¡ Buen trabajo!

[corderosiete]

Gracias hermana. El maestro en palabras desconocidas es d-pend

[mineopoly]

You put a new twist on the laws of thermodynamics. Hot stuff this is - "enthalpy of the skin"

[corderosiete]

Thanks friend. It is a word that comes from the Greek. "Hot"

[ehisoria]

Tired of insomnia from one night with xenon lights
Love this sir and your poetry all together

[corderosiete]

Thank you dear ehisoria. Your sweet words are appreciated.