Be a Love In The Embrace Of Fire

in #poetry6 years ago
  • The lions are energizing the power in the gentle waves of desert forests, power comes in the minds of the winner as we look at your face on the pedestal of beauty. I understand the steps of big people in the fog of small failures, I want your kisses on my hands.

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  • The stars are witnesses of our earthly love, we walk through the memories of a hot winter in the center of a romantic fairytale. I am afraid of your going to countries of unknown origin, being my princess in all my dreams - You are the queen of my frozen heart.

  • With thoughts we start volcanoes in the waves of waterfalls, teachers carry the heaviest burden of our ignorance. I see the beginning of a new beginning of our passion without end, be my process of growth, I love the power of your wishes on my body.

  • Together we open all the doors of happiness on the other side of the successful missions, you won my deepest emotions. I feel a strong fire around my excitement, slipping into your energy of ecstasy, be my memory and the future in the abundance of romance moments.

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Original poetry written by @dobartim
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a good poet can easily convey his feelings to the readers and you have been able to do just with it. good posting

Wow .. amazing. Very beautiful poetry. Your poetry is very effective... love is inner feeling of your heart..love mean who like you. Life is life .. be a love in the embrace of fire . 💖l like your poetry.

Thanks for sharing this photography is very nice art post

Beautiful poem. Positive passion and consistency are great ingredients of success.

Deep poetry..... Beautifully written.,❤ it

A spectacular write, Dobartim. So much beauty and passion expressed with acuity and insight. I was particularily struck by this line.

... I understand the steps of big people in the fog of small failures ...

Perhaps it speaks for all us.

Bravo:):):)

I understand the steps of big people in the fog of small failures

This line caught my attention @dobartim. All big and successful people have threaded the path of failures before, but they were persistent in the midst of the failures that's why they succeeded.

But it's so unfortunate that many people these days don't know how to walk through failure to the other end of success. People give up too easily. I can see this in steemit community where people complain that they are earning much money. I tell them patience and persistence. That's the key to becoming a success no matter the failures.

Thank you @dobartim for inspiring me with those lines.

poetry is a force capable of creating suggestions for self and soul, powerful charisma radiated from a series of beautiful words that fascinate

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Beautiful piece.

... teachers carry the heaviest burden of our ignorance...

Interesting thing is, teachers also cure our ignorance.

They sure are amazing words that does express the beauty and the eternal love :)

So very beautiful. SO very true.

Very nice and soothing. Poetry will make an excellent class for your Steemit Schools project.

Your energy floats through space and time and spreads its flowery guts across the whole planet of ours. Freedom of love explodes through your poetry enrichening the mind of others, spreading our wings and making us believe once more how poetry takes the meaning to another level.

We are the order in disaster, we are Icarus against the Sun, we fly with passion and we win together! ;)

Oh, great and deep words for love, relationships and togetherness and yes love relationships are really beautiful and the relationships also contain the small mistakes but overlooking those mistakes and understanding each other is the greatest thing in an relationship, and the most important thing is spiritual love in relationships. Thanks for sharing this amazing piece. 🙂

Great poetry. What’s the story with all these animated images you use? They’re very cool!

what beautiful writing, many successes. You have enough talent