I Hold You On My Hand

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)
  • This is a wind that rock the ships, this is a storm that covers the roofs above the clouds. The weather of the carriages and cold kisses of volcanic inspiration comes in your steps. Show me the future through the love of my memories, show me a new inspiration to move on in search of new happiness.


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  • I am discovering the new dimensions of your beauty, the light shows the paths of your eyes in the fields of fragrant new. I see water that passes the paths of passion, the heart is soft in the hands of true love that raises me to a new level of thinking - You are the universe of challenges.

  • Show your most beautiful smiles in the rain of natural words and the magical energy of your movements. Start enthusiasm in the heart of the desert, raise your beliefs in yourself and your possibilities - Your success is the work of your ideas and disciplined love.

  • The music of new ideas brings new waves of creative energy, we are changing in the clouds of material desires. Look at your moves in the yoga study, the universe has brought new rules in our unique illusion - We are dust on the hands of giants - we are pure love on the wings of fairy tales.


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Beautiful words as always, my friend. Keep inspiring!

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There is so much life and love embedded in your poetry. The images are mind blowing too.
I never get tired of reading through your poetry.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

Amazing comment

You poetry depicts life, creativity and love, your approach of connecting these just makes it amazing, am glad am learning from the best...well done and thankyou @dobartim

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Poetry is a window into the soul. It is a combination of words, delivery, emotion, tone all blended together. The end result of the listener/ reader should be emotion. It really cannot be taught... just practiced. It is one of life richest pleasures. This poetry truly does have magnificent power.. to make us feel and appreciate the depth of life. Great work!

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Very inspiring poetry your the instruments and the model of human race, your the incredible leader to defind our ultimate destination

Wow amazing comment

Love every words but most especially

The music of new ideas brings new waves of creative energy, we are changing in the clouds of material desires.

Applicable to different occassion, depends of the reader. As the saying goes

beauty is in the eyes of the beholder

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Lovely lyrical poetry... Sang it with some rap and music.. It will be a superb song...

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Wow looks amazing. Amazing piece of poetry also. You never stop wowing us with you post sir

Thank you very much

beautiful post

Beautifull poetry dear keep it up . Very peacefull poetry

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true love A red rose flower ..

Excellent

Lovely inspiring words again. Thank you.
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Words that are very touching, with a burning spirit we must be sure if life will we live as it should be, thank you for sharing and it is very poetic and inspirational @dobartim.

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@dobartim You are a poet of reflection and philosophical thought. These lyrics convey by simple means the impression of intensity and are a perfect combination of profound thought and deep emotions.

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You are a creative, hopefully I am also inspired by a piece of poem that you describe.Thank you

so amazing post my best friend

Keep going

"Start enthusiasm in the heart of the desert, raise your beliefs in yourself and your possibilities" - your posts always motivate not only to reflection and self-development, but also to concrete actions! Thank you!

Wow,you keep making me fall more in love with poetry. Nice words👍👍👍👍👍