Success in the clouds of our happiness, we are the wind in the mind of the tiger. Your eyes burn the water on the sources of memory, you are a paradise of the butterflies in the world of fairy tales. Leave a gentle kiss on the hands of light, wake me up with the energy of love in this beautiful morning.
You are the emotion of perfection that brings new knowledge to the wings of digital emotions, history looks further into the windows of the future at the moment of our karma. Nature compiles a new song for major warriors and prophets of wide dimensions.
Night fell asleep in the morning fog, you are a lighthouse of my illusion that holds a lamp with diamonds. Be a champion of dynamic movements, the storm calms the volcanoes of passion in the beauty that causes breathlessness -
the sun shines on the eyes of the cosmos.A gentle passion shifts the silence in my heart, you are a wave of an impossible mission that raises my ego's passion in the valleys of the desert oases. I see rivers that grow in the hands of love, you are pure emotions of cosmic prognosis - open your eyes and see my heart.
- Original Poetry written by @dobartim Be part of our Steemit School on Discord Channel https://discord.gg/q9VEn5n
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@dobartim this pic and poem is so beautiful.
when i am a old lady, i wanna have white long hair toooo
so adorable!!!!
i am a bit busy at the moment...i saw the school on discord....i would love to help, if i know what i can do for this project.
but only if you want, chat with me personal at discord. some artist brainstorming...if you dont want, also nice. even than i like the poetrys of you cause i doesnt care if somebody is a whale or not.
:-*
i am waiting of more great poems :-D
this makes life more beautiful
steeeeeeeem aum
I am open for you and @yoganarchista 24 Hours, I love you and your honest heart
:-* i have an idea which you maybe like .... could you open a chat for us both at discord? i dont know how this works (i am not so techniqual...)
hugs to ya :-)
and of course to our sweeeeet @yoganarchista (maybe i will see her later :-))
I dont know hot to find you, please go to our general channel , than I can see you @akashas , or tell to @yoganarchista to find me on private chat
You’re my tidal wave
My strength when the ocean is still
You’re my ego and my self esteem
Without you I feel naked
You’re my inspiration
When vibes were unmotivating
You’re my encouragement
When I receive discouragement from all
You’re nothing to me
But a great gift from above .
Comes rain and sunshine
You’d always be my Universe
Make poetry my friend, keep going
That's how infectious INSPIRATION is,it opens us up to expressing what's hidden in us.
Night fell asleep in the morning fog, you are a lighthouse of my illusion that holds a lamp with diamonds. Be a champion of dynamic movements, the storm calms the volcanoes of passion in the beauty that causes breathlessness -
the sun shines on the eyes of the cosmos
Your words are like sweet tasting honey on a fine morning, sweet as odorous white lilies in the noon time, and soothing like a cool blowing breeze on an angels wings at dawn.
Sweet sweet poem @dobartim
Good morning for Steemit School
Loved it! Listen to the audio version of the poetry clicking the link below:
https://soundgasm.net/u/adisri/In-The-Rivers-Of-Emotion
Thank you very much
Your words give so much lighter and brightness. It’s a sabbath day today and you know what friend, you blessed me. Thank you
See you on the top
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O! Goodness this is wonderful
Thank you very much
i really likr your post
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The choice of pictures are cool
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good post by frend
Thanks
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I love the mode of this poem. It should be dedicated to someone special, beloved or heart beat. Permission to use your words on that special person in my life.
Thank you very much
Beautiful @dobartim
A confession of love, passion and admiration.
Your word have this sweetness to them.
Real beauty.
Thank you for your nice words
Well, poetry kills the unrealistic boredom of my mind.
Great piece!
You can check my blog for my first poem here. And I hope you like it
Welcome to Steemit
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Most welcome dear
Please visit my blog please
What a poetry i wish someone dedicate it to me! I reestem it!
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Wow your post give so much lighter and brightness it so confession for love and passion, goodness this wonderful.
Thank you very much
Mind-blowing. The poem gives the energy after reading. Please keep posting more. Thanks.
Welcome to Steemit
very good poem @dobartim.
I am amazed by your poetry.
if you have free time, please visit my poem.
and please comment to my writing.
thank you very much @dobartim
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This is really great. I just don't know why everything about this poem is talking to me personally .
All i have seen
All I have felt
All that am yet to see
All that am yet to feel
This is so wonderful @dobartim
Open your eyes and see my heart.... This you should tell her on my behalf .
Drown in the sea of Love, captive emotionally
See you on the top
nice photograpy
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I’m not good with poetry but when I see a good one I know 💪🏽
Your pictures are so deep😊
I love the first picture of the lady with grey hair with the water fall concept 🤗
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Thank you very much
poetry is a beautiful collection of words. poetry tells of a bitter life to be beautiful. even when we cry, we will understand tears as a gift.
Only smile make big change
Trust me guys, this is how you paint a picture with words
This how you let the one you love know that he or she
is not chasing after shadows
This how you let them knows that to you, he or she
is worth more that sparrows
Beautiful work of art @dobartim
Thank you very much
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mmmmmm great article with great words and meaning and pictures i like this topic
Thank you
@dobartim Exceptional imagination, we wait for another amazing picture from you
Thanks
This poetry it's trigger my mind to keep steeming so that my blog portfolio increase thanks
Thank you very much for this nice words
A very powerful and emotional poem.
And those pictures brought the poem to life more. I could feel it so real.
Thank you very much
My heart pours out like a cup
That it may be filled to the top
With my tears I fill it up
Wondering if I would ever stop
Until my eyes were dried up
As dry as the desert draught
I let my feelings flow
Flowing in the rivers of emotion
I love your peom it inspired me to drop that piece
The phrase I loved the most in your lovely poem. A poem soo sweet.
very nice post , thanks for sharing it with us
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Lots of raw emotion in this post! I love it!
I'm learning about your style and topics at #steemitschool, and so far it's been refreshing and amusing. Looking forward to drop by one of your classes. Thanks, @dobartim.
Kiss me with the kisses of life
and let me feel the taste of your lips
Holding hands while the cool breeze pass us by
Your hands I'll never let go, so hold on to mine tightly cos our love is here to stay.
Ps; ever since I came across your post on this platform, you make me fall in love with poetry. Keep it up!
I like your combination philoshophy, imagination, and real fact in nature. This is so beautiful poetry! You're very creative person