Your Hat
You carelessly
toss on my hat
and cast your eyes
away with a shrug
like a twenties
show girl who flirts
to keep the flames
from tickling her
Heart.
~Evan James~
Photo Credit: Free-Photos
You carelessly
toss on my hat
and cast your eyes
away with a shrug
like a twenties
show girl who flirts
to keep the flames
from tickling her
Heart.
~Evan James~
Photo Credit: Free-Photos
the line ''and cast your eyes
away with a shrug'' is pure gem. amazing piece of writing
Thank you! I appreciate your kind words
This is a very strong and deep piece of writing. The words 'carelessly' and 'shrug' are perfect and really portray the depth of this simple poem about a hat. Thank you for sharing!
If you have some spare time and are interested, I have some poetry on my blog too.
Thank you for the kind words my friend! It is encouraging to see that the message is portrayed effectively. I’ll definitely check out your blog!
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Very nice picture and post
Thank you :)
great
Thanks!
I always liked that idea. Good writing is raw and doesn’t hold back.