The Same Day

[fira]

THE SAME DAY

Today is on the same date

Similar months I have been

fulfill the promise of embedding

ring on your finger

twelve years old

but now I can not find

the ring was exchanged for demands

the stomach of the tangled days

Comments

[rizajb]

Oow ow oww
The poem poetic friends. Heavily laden words meaning, made for those who appreciate reading it.
Greetings, I am waiting for the next best post from you @fira

[fira]

Thanks for your commenting :

[rizajb]

You are welcome

[younushaw]

oww,so sweet

[riadshahria]

Wow