Don't be too hard on yourself, it's good! I like the overall message you are trying to convey, but the rhyming feels a little forced. I see you have more poetry on your blog. I can't wait to read your other stuff. Following!
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Thank you. Yeah, I think it's forced too. Haha. But I'll try hard next time :)
Thank you for reading.