Sometimes. (Poetry, English) First try!

in #poetry7 years ago

Sometimes a day starts with a rhyme.
A mixture of words as the start of a fine
and neverending story called life.

Sometimes a day starts with a smile.
A golden shining sun next to you,
just hang out for a while.

Sometimes a day starts in the middle of the night.
The moon carefully shows you the way
to the first light of the day.

And sometimes a day starts with advice.
But you never listen, and the light
has to tell you twice that sometimes,
there is no second chance, no happy end
to the story of life.
Sometimes.


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Thanks for your attention!
My first english poem!!


Arrivederci!

Picture: Alpsee, Füssen

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Wonderful job, thanks @ilsignore greetings

sehr gut! :)

This is awesome, hard to believe this is your first English poem, Resteemed!

Thank you, very nice words ☺️

Very nice :) I like your poem
also the picture. Did you take it yourself?

I also write poetry, if you're interested please follow me @raisinbran :)

Yes i took it myself. :)
And thank you!!

beautiful :) where is it?

Lake is called Alpsee. It is near Schloss Neuschwanstein, maybe you have heard about it