This is pretty good, don't feel bad about it. Although your first 2 lines of the 2nd stanza do not rhyme.
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This is pretty good, don't feel bad about it. Although your first 2 lines of the 2nd stanza do not rhyme.
Thank you. I couldn't think of something that would fit.
Anyway, thank you for reading :)
How about "fan" or "flan"? Just suggesting. It's your poem and I think it looks good as is.