Love between Fire and Water : A short Sad story

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

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Hello guys !
I decided to write a poem trough a Picture Story.
It's about a Fire Boy and a Water Girl.

2/3 months earlier, I deciphered the picture story and tried to create a short novel out of it.

Now it's time for a poem for it.

Read each 4 lines of the poem and see the picture after that 4 lines.
Keep reading like this until the end.
Thank you.

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Love story between Fire and Water


It's a Poetic story like no other,
A little lost Fire and his partner.
Do you want to know how it goes ?
If you do, stay with the flow.

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Once a fire lit up a jungle,
burnt all the trees, bringing a cloud so nimble.
Came down the rain, shutting off the fires,
leaving behind a little Fire so simple !

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It's a lost boy,Be it a Fire,
With no purpose or so desire.
Rain had stopped, he opened his eyes.
Don't know if he realized, he was a fire.

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Maybe God didn't want for him any suffers,
thus he created another soul that differs.
A little remaining rain water turn into a Girl.
Love at first sight for them, will now they be lovers ?

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A magical wind pushed them from behind,
Or did they act according to their love in Mind ?
They really wanted to feel eachother,
But Fire and Water ? Looks like, the fate wasn't so kind.

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As much sad as they can be,
not able confess or love to feel.
Suddenly seeing a stone, an idea Fire had.
he created a Bridge of Connection, that's a big deal.

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Finally after a bridge of love and feelings
they sat down for some time killings.
They chatted for long and long and long
expressing their love and keeping no missings.

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Time passed so fast, then snow began to fall.
Hardly an leaves on the trees so tall.
All alone in the forest, walking they are.
There's not a single soul, nobody to call.

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Walking for so long, they now need some rest.
Soon they saw, a small cave to their west !
Entering the cave, as they are together,
to relax in the night and start again the day next.

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The Fire boy looked at the Water girl so easy to sway.
Suddenly their eyes connected, he turned his head away.
He realized embarrassingly, they are going to sleep together.
Nothing amusing did happen, except like this they rested today.

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Slowly the sun rose up, almost 12 O'clock on.
The Fire Boy waked up earlier then the girl, doing a little yawn.
He looked to see if this was all just a dream.
No sooner than he realized, their bridge of connection was gone.

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He tried to wake the girl, but she was too tired to answer.
It's not worth it to wake her up, so he didn't try any further.
He checked for clues where their Bridge of Connection was.
He saw an Ant line and the ant carrying the stone not so far.

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He ran and ran, He must get it or else holding hands He can't.
It took little time until he took back the stone from that ant.
Getting back the stone, he was so happy,
Until a monster approached him so gigant.

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That gigantic monster, try to guess who it is.
It's none but ofcourse a man who some warmth he needs,
He took the Fire boy on a wood and headed for home.
Fire Boy tried to look back with despair to the cave in the trees.

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Sad, the Fire boy looked at the jungle, hoping to see her again.
Being trapped inside a lantern, his heart was burning in pain.
Suddenly, he saw someone trying to climb to the window.
It was the Water girl, seeing her, some hopes he gained.

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The Water Girl Came towards the lantern, a conversation they had.
She said she will not leave him, asked him not be sad.
The Day so slowly passed and the night didn't mind to come,
Fire boy asking her to leave, but she wouldn't listen to this lad.

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It's now starting of the night, Water girl decided a sleep to take.
Fire Boy yawned and decided to sleep after waiting for her sake.
Suddenly he saw smoke coming from the water girl
At first he didn't understand whether it' happening or is it fake.

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Things kept getting serious while she was fading away,
The Fire boy shouted so much and he couldn't even look away.

It didn't take long for her to dry up
The Fire boy had to see her disappear which was not okay.

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The monster reappeared behind him and lantern.
It diffused the Fire Boy and the Boy was hoping for his turn.
After being diffused, he turned into smoke.
His sad soul flew into the sky where another soul awaiting return.

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Water girl it was, not a different person.
So Happy they were, it was a soul reunion.
They came forward touching eachother's hand.
This time they weren't fire and water, no facts to depend on.

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Finally, for you guys a lesson,
Emptiness can be decayed, while love passes on.
Sometimes it's better to Give people what they need,
These things might be to you who they belong.

There is no gain unless you experience pain,
Bear this in your mind again and again.
Now it's high time to end my poem.
Please do remember me, I am Rayne.

And That's it guys !


It was a long long poem but...

I hope you guys have enjoyed it.
I know, I am not a good poet, but I gave it my best. It took me 3 hours to turn the Picture Story into a Poem.

Please rate it out of 10 if you want.

Disclaimer :

These images aren't my creation. I just made a poem out of this Picture Story.

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That's a great poem you have written there, brother !

Thanks brother. :)

Great Poem Brother..
Story was greatly explained ! :)

Glad you liked it.
It wasn't easy though !

Wow ! Such a sad story !

Thanks a lot. I tried my best to draw out the story. :)

Wish I could have written a poem like you :)
Awesome Poem Story !

bro i can see you in upme :p

Lol.. I didn't expect you at this time of night ! :D

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