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RE: Dry Feelings

in #poetry6 years ago

NICE POST
I comment with this

when the rain drops in the head
then flows through the child's hair on the forehead
feel when the whisper of water through skin pores
gentle soft greeting with the crib
invites us to the sky where the rain comes from
and when you tilt your head
will you encounter a cloud that will not run out at this time
will continue to flow throughout the day
down the gap to the earth
so you know where to go
when the horizon began to fade
sign when we are to pack
no longer question what and who
so we can come back
on the essential

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Awesome comment like always, see you in Steem Schools

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