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RE: 🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #8 SUBMISSION THREAD - GET YOUR REAL ANALYSIS ON SUNDAY 🎧

in #rapchallenge7 years ago

i'm an Irish man, a Zulu man, a mixed race hooligan\ an African, a colored man, a king like Solomon\ don't fuck with me please; don't even be bothering\ I'm all about the peace, but I'm clever when i'm conquering\ i got 'em like "gee's!" with the bars that i be hollering\ got 'em on their knee's coz I'm pleasing with the harmonies\ life is kinda funny, I'm just laughing at the comedy\ "you think they gonna like this flow?" i don't know, probably\ "you think you got talent tho?", hell yea! obviously!\ I'm gonna be the King like Shaka... Zulu\ I'm gonna wake you up like Irish... coffee\ I'm gonna kick it off right, set it off properly\ I'm healthy for your brain, so I'm sorta like Broccoli\ giving you the good shit, giving you the quality\ giving you a piece of my minds eye property\ this is a rap challenge, I'm challenging my sovereignty\ I'm governing my state of mind; my mind state policies\ I plan to be all over the map!; like geography\ believe it and it will be, yea; thats my philosophy\ work towards achieving it... hell yea! obviously..\ but they keep telling me: "boy stop fooling yourself...."\ and I'm like.... "Get the fuk outta here!"

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Real nice bro!

thank you

You bet bro

I'm all about the peace, but I'm clever when i'm conquering

healthy for your brain so im sorta like broccoli, that one crackin me up, good shit

lol thanks man

I want to taste that Irish coffee for real, cause this entry was fly, digged it bro!

appreciate it man

Basically almost quoting your whole verse
You were really cool in this one, dope flow, creative bars, a fun factor to your delivery,
character and tonality switch ups
Great entry bro, this one is a repeater for sure!

"I'm all about the peace, but I'm clever when i'm conquering\ i got 'em like "gee's!" with the bars that i be hollering\ got 'em on their knee's coz I'm pleasing with the harmonies\ life is kinda funny, I'm just laughing at the comedy\ "you think they gonna like this flow?" i don't know, probably\ "you think you got talent tho?", hell yea! obviously!\ I'm gonna be the King like Shaka... Zulu\ I'm gonna wake you up like Irish... coffee\ I'm gonna kick it off right, set it off properly\ I'm healthy for your brain, so I'm sorta like Broccoli\ giving you the good shit, giving you the quality\ giving you a piece of my minds eye property\ this is a rap challenge, I'm challenging my sovereignty\ I'm governing my state of mind; my mind state policies\ I plan to be all over the map!; like geography"

lol glad you like it bro

Yeah no doubt bro, it was slick and witty

Haha you going in on this one, damn everyone killed this beat.

thanks man... everyone came hard this week

real poetic my man nice entry!