OFFICIAL SUBMISSION THREAD
WEEK #6
MAKE SURE YOU READ THE RULES!
Yo yo if you are part of the Rap Challenge this week, here it is! Let get all these entries in so we can tally up the scores. This week should be an interesting week because the #1 winner will win a spot on a song with myself and the legendary Pace Won of the Outsidaz. I am looking forward to getting down and dirty and judging these rappers this week!
https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@kaykunoichi/rap-challenge-week-6-kunoichi
DAYUMMM !
That was a mind fuck (pardon my language). Absolutely loved this. Lyrics are so real o weee
Hahaha..Why a mind fuck? lmao. And thanks!
I say that as the biggest compliment I can give to an artist. Mindfucks sell out arenas :)
Awww :)
:)))
my first female entry! this is epic!!!
yay!!
Sounds good doll, glad ya found the thread.
Sometimes I follow the rules
@kaykunoichi I looooove how you rap and your style omg! <3 <3
Awww Thank you!! <3
eyy barrin up! and adorable (i'm assuming) daughter!
haha yes that's my Daughter/hype girl!
nice you got it ma gotta out you on a track
Thank you!
real deal skill ,respect :)
I recommend headphones for this one, full lyrics are provided below so you can read or rap along. I appreciate you all for listening and reading my lyrics.
Verse 1:
I never knew Iβd be adopted away from my parents
Read βA Child Called It,β my connectionβs apparent/a parent
My heart had turned a brittle-cold, so wasteful and barren
I tried pretending all the years, they were out running errands
I never knew that my Aunt would be motherly caring
With my Grandma housing, feeding me, healing the tearing
I used to sneak out a lot, it was risky and daring
I put my life on the line from the pain I was bearing
I tried to find the right escape, staring out curtain drapes
Trying to bottle hate, still wondering βbout my fate
Age 12, I found my faith, fought demons near face to face
Literal sense of case, and beat βem with saving grace
People think that Iβm playing, Story flow entertainment
But I canβt deny engagement, the spiritual worldβs adjacent
Knowledge so real and ancient, vessel I am in placement
Pouring out deepest statements, a gorge of love fighting hatredβ¦so strong!
Song Lyrics Copyrighted by Verbal D
I fuck with this line for sure "People think that Iβm playing, Story flow entertainment
But I canβt deny engagement, the spiritual worldβs adjacent" your writing continues to improve, good job homie
Thank you for peeping the penmanship bro, much respect and gratitude.
Solid Entry as usual, lotta balls using an Eminem beat xD
Thank you man, I wasn't feeling any of the other beats, and I knew Eminem's beat required extra effort and performance. It was a solid challenge
It's tight D, hard to beat man.
I'm truly only aiming to be better than myself, I know my flaws, thank you bro, appreciate your valued feedback
I feel ya, I'm my worst critic too. Or best critic? Not sure how that should go lol
Worst and best, it goes hand in hand bro, I feel the same way about myself!
Ahh storytelling, always love such verses. Big up bro!
Thank you very much bro, gotta share my story and get it off my chest
@verbal-d Ayyeeeee you spit it yo!!!
Thank you very much my friend, I appreciate you listening, did you get a chance to peep the Queen Official track? You gotta hear it! That pertains to all queens.
you went in my dude!
so great flow , respect G :)
Hardcore shit!!! Love your flow man, pretty Jay-z like indeed.
:)
your flow smooth as silk man
Sickkk, Kinda got a slight Jay-Z feel there haha, dope man!
@alao Ayeeeee you smashed it!
Dope bars yo!!!
Here's Me. Enjoy. feedback would be appreciated. good luck yoll
Real cool vibe and fresh rhythmic style flow bro
"I'm the numba one spitta in the jungle fam!"
Nice flow. Digs.
Lyrics
Im a Houston kid probably off hallucinogens
Scumbag degenerate likely cause of all my friends
tie the noose record my end
In heaven with a fucking benz
Raping every fucking beat i guess this is a sinny sin
Nigga you making dough ?
no homie no you aint eatin
my niggas they making bread
yo oven aint even heated
to stay up in this game you gotta have a reason
or we put a bullet in ya head and give you something to believe in
they come to yo aid like magic but hopefully it aint magic
that shit would be tragic like no bodies in the casket
we killing boys adolf
pull up to your crib cause we caught you on the radar
pull up with the mask off spray you with the AR
we some fucking killers and we never take a day off
shooting like the playoffs i guess the gym done paid off
had to be the boss the cause the company made some layoffs
had to be the boss cause the company made some layoffs...feel that man
You had fun with this one I see, and this line of yours is truth, if there's no known purpose or intention, keep it moving
"to stay up in this game you gotta have a reason"
thanks bro!
You're very welcome!
https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@eddiebxxxx/eddie-bxxxx-rapchallenge-week-6
-We all know sheep need a shepherd, thats natural/
-But Iβm a goat that wonβt tolerate the beef wit cattle/
-We were never banished from the kingdom, we ski-daddled/
Left the garden of Eden before we could even eat the apple/
-Fuck bein b-lessed, i b/
More wit that intellect, thats why the stress is more complex/
-Thats why i never spit that lame brain nonsense/
-Talk is cheap, i treat knowledge like dollars/
-I donβt rap to entertain, i rap/
To enter yer brain, overload circuits, blow the mainframe/
You lovin it, I need a beat like a tranny/
Needs a changed name, my rap name, same name, government/
-The man, the legend, so fuck who, what/
Where you reppin, the scared donβt question, so question/
Do you play stupid games just to win stupid prizes?/
-Its a damn shame ya third eyeβs been crystallizin/
Breadcrumb stale while Iβm innovative and redefinin/
-I keep the peace while you keep the silence/
"Its a damn shame ya third eyeβs been crystallizin" heaviest bar of the challenge this week
It's a damn shame your third eye's been crystallizin
strick man
Vicious gritty approach as always bro, heavy entry
"i b/
More wit that intellect, thats why the stress is more complex/
-Thats why i never spit that lame brain nonsense/
-Talk is cheap, i treat knowledge like dollars/
-I donβt rap to entertain, i rap/
To enter yer brain, overload circuits, blow the mainframe/"
Thanks bro, and i always enjoy your bars of reality.
Appreciate that, you're welcome, I know we have different perspectives and beliefs, but we can definitely acknowledge the skill, the pen and other aspects of flow, delivery and presence factors of Hip Hop. Your entries are impacting
Man you never cease to amaze me. I look forward to judging your submissions every week buddy, always epic
Thanks Chief.
you're welcome buddy. just that real shit
Tight bro!
''Its a damn shame ya third eyeβs been crystallizin'', oehlala, I like that one, sick entry man!
Heres my submission SteemIt family...lyrics below
https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@opinizeunltd/steemit-rap-challenge-week-6-submission
I freestyle or writer, lover or fighter
who flyer
chew on a shroom or light up the fire
who higher
my aura shine brighter im a highlighter
i dont walk i hang glide im a skydiver
young macguyver dont need a gun to stunt on negus
& i show way too much love to ever front on negus
beautiful mind so i love to play dumb on negus
an enigma myself cant worry about no one else
shout out to rondonson this contest inspiring
Steem made me put my jersey back on come out of retirement
know im coming out firing
so even if im missing a couple of em gon hit ya
a 1 man army i brought my solo militia
with 1 distinct order kill u and everyone with ya
mister got em on the tip of my stick
and how i serve em in the booth they should leave me a tip
Ayyeeeee you had me wantin to smoke a bleezy to this!! :D @opinizeunltd
Fire that shit up lol
eyyy fam "i don't walk i hang glide i'm a skydiver" yeee!
preciate it homie
you nice my g! this shit fire bro....but yo..you pronounce my name Ron Donson lol. two separate names...but you killed this!! Salute homie
First post on steemit, me rapping while delivering pizzas. hope you like :)
Lyrics
zeroβs got no rep and one minute set it,
by the way i hate to waste space with a whack sentence,
rap fetish, how am i this fly but this underground,
I'm just turning up the sound,
it was stuck on zero, now i keep it hundred,
keep it bumping, till the sun is up in, the dungeon,
what the fuck is this, fishing in a barrel filled with fifty fish,
with a barrel fifty cal and a packet of ritz,
they go crackers for this, rappers shitting brick,
like a drug mule during and after a shift,
itβs too late iβm too two face, Trying to paint over a dent when I rap,
a rush like a drug when the pen hits the pad,
when i hold the mic, youβll feel like you saw a poltergeist,
I'll deliver my last pizza like Walter white, on the roof, cold as ice,
Welcome to Steemit man! Good place to start, got a community of like minded over here.
Anyone who has experienced depression will relate to this -Burning Zeal-
Lyrics:
RIP to Chester Bennington, so depressed and negative
The most positive mental states senses it
Till they need antidepressants, to function in my presence
They say Iβm the deadliest depressant
Waking up in the middle of the night in a cold sweat
That feeling like the worldβs gonna end
Barely energy left to be technical
Sorry rhyme schemes, remind me of depression
Too complex sometimes and donβt make sense at all
Ejecting this message off my chest like a cockroach
Releasing eggs, seconds before theyβre dead
Could never start to live, before my birth descended in the depths at the end of death
Tried Dettol for the scars, STORY is healing's a TALE
Like cutting off a lizardβs, pain just regenerates
Penetrates so deep, your soul levitates to escape
The start of anesthetics yay no pain!
But no pain paradoxically hurts the most
The numbness has some feelings like a paraplegic
Prosthetic feet is stepped on "medic!" hie hie
Good flow man, trump
Thank you
o weeeee killed it
Thanks bro
absolutely buddy keep doing great things
Forgot last week and almost did again this week but whipped this up real quick! Thanks for holding us down @rondonson and props to the other contestants!
human microscopic super zoomin
Fresh bro, keep them flows zoning into the multidimensional journeys
You got my vote and a resteem :]
Bless up! Bro! Will follow.