RE: Snax.one - Decentralized social media overlay

[lordneroo]

Hello, @camzy!

Thank you for promoting Snax with an informative and well-illustrated blog post. The project itself looks very promising, and I can't wait to see what the future has in store for Snax. Your review is succinct, and contains all the necessary details. Keep up the good work.

On the content side, even though I like all the information provided, I have to admit that I wanted to see more personal content in your review. I wanted to read a bit more about your personal knowledge, views and suggestions for the development of this project. Nevertheless, the post contains valuable information about the project, and I appreciate the effort you put into your work.

Furthermore, the post did have issues of style and proofreading, and I would be happy to cite a few of them in a follow-up comment, if you wish. To sum up, I enjoyed reading your work, but I think that another edit pass might have helped significantly.

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Comments

[camzy]

Thanks for the review lordneroo, i would love to see the issues of style and proofreading my post had..🙂🙂🙂
Just incase of another time

[lordneroo]

Hello!

I will cite a few examples for you:

In today's blog post i'll be writing on Snax.one a decentralized social media overlay that still gives users control over there social network account and still earn, without mission out on all the experience.

Let me rephrase that: "In today's blog post I'll be writing about Snax.one, a decentralized social media overlay that still gives users control over their social network account, and enables them to earn without missing out on all the experience."

First of all, I'll like to give a huge kudos to the founders and everyone behind the snax idea, the ecosystem in making here will very huge within the next 2-3 years depend on how fast blockchain gains massive adoption.

I am not sure if I understood correctly, but I think you meant to write: "First of all, I'd like to give a huge kudos to the founders and everyone behind the snax idea. The ecosystem in the making here will become huge within the next 2-3 years, depending on how fast the blockchain technology gains massive adoption."

I hope you will find this comment useful.

[camzy]

interesting
thanks a lot neroo
will start double checks on proofreading

[utopian-io]

Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!