Zerrrry interesting...is there any way you can post your music that you have....(you tube? ...or something...
....I'll look it again tomorrow with fresh eyes - and brain (late-ish here)...I've been known to help with a lyric or two....(but with the music made already...)
nope, it's only in my head. I have a garage band software and maybe I will get it going there and then place it on sound-cloud (if it still exists?).
Apart from that, the text itself may entertain the reader. If it is understandable... somehow.
Good night, Madam.
Stop calling me madam... (not triggered.lol)
hehe
I will, when you stop calling me matey/mate :)
my lyrics ...enjoy !
mine do more rhyme - lol