I went among the songwriters. Maybe not the finest, but sometimes the roughest will do :)
If anyone wants to work with me on the lyrics or has some suggestions: you are welcome! While I have a rhythm or a melody in my mind, it's not all worked out yet.
Stunned
T'all started with ...
... Exponentiality
and ...
huge doses of
.... Morality
melted into ...
great Totality
The wave,
the neck cuff,
the cop's ladle
my wits
worthless,
it's...
keepin me from the Schmidt's
In isolation I go ...
round and round
in dis-believe,
an there I am ...
so astound, so astound, so astound ...
Manners at the house of Tanner's
where you ...
don't swear and you ... don't smoke
and you ...
don't drink and you .. don't joke!
Amen (!) and a woman
on the ... toilet
Oh, but ... the gender ...
... etiquette!
"Honour!"
you say, coz it ... feels good,
when it doesn't sound female or like
...manhood.
Friendships, rancid, long before 2020
You went to Inverness
without ...
plague, without ...
... stress
without ...
... fever test
dancing on the square
don't you dare
but now?
You're astound, You're astound, You're astound ...
Take my irony,
mess with me,
but "they" ...
strike me,
provide me
with pains
and ... hysteria
and prudence reigns
and my spirit breaks
coz it stings, it's a hunt
and...
I'm so stunned, I'm so stunned, I'm so stunned
But Ladies and Gents (!) and transformers at all ends, let's sing together (!):
La Le Lu Corona
against it there is soma
especially for granny
given by the nanny
My heart is pure
my DNA is dirt
isn't there the cure?
does it not not hurt?
Was I not all ears, not all clear,
without fear
well fitted
belittled
But no, can't be
can't be me.
A friend comes in,
casts my figure
and then
she pretends
she pretends to ask
"no bra on?"
while on her task
(wants her boobs be bigger)
And I'm... stunned, oh so stunned, oh so stunned.
The train had left,
not to Hawai,
there you go by plane,
only then, shit man,
if you wear a cloth and ...
... behave ...
... insane ...
need a doctor-lawyer
to go by the book
show your ticket
T'might get you off the hook
that makes you ... oh so stunned, oh so stunned, oh so stunned
And now, everyone, let's sing the children's song:
La Le Lu Corona
against it there is soma
especially for granny
given by the nanny
My heart is pure
my DNA is dirt
isn't there the cure?
does it not not hurt?
Yeah! Once again:
Your heart is pure
your DNA is dirt
you welcome cure
coz it doesn't hurt.
... doesn't hurt, doesn't hurt, doesn't hurt.
I would be honored if you'd consider taking a look at this,
https://discord.gg/cR6jVagG
I did but I can't see anything it says that I am not allowed to see the main thread. Can you enlighten me?
Zerrrry interesting...is there any way you can post your music that you have....(you tube? ...or something...
....I'll look it again tomorrow with fresh eyes - and brain (late-ish here)...I've been known to help with a lyric or two....(but with the music made already...)
nope, it's only in my head. I have a garage band software and maybe I will get it going there and then place it on sound-cloud (if it still exists?).
Apart from that, the text itself may entertain the reader. If it is understandable... somehow.
Good night, Madam.
Stop calling me madam... (not triggered.lol)
hehe
I will, when you stop calling me matey/mate :)
my lyrics ...enjoy !
mine do more rhyme - lol
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