Humbly, I am less interested in proofreading as I am in sharing awareness of a solution to the psychopaths in control on OUR planet (stolen from Us by the psychopaths in control through "trusts" - Unum Sanctum and the Cestui Que Vie "trusts" - and deceit). I will offer two links...
https://steemit.com/anarchy/@amaterasusolar/endia
I do hope You choose to read - the second link is a (very) short story I wrote to illustrate what I see.