Looking at the replies, I think this story is a bit of a failure.
I was trying to make it clear (in a subtle way) that it was Death that works there (not me).
Sorry.
Looking at the replies, I think this story is a bit of a failure.
I was trying to make it clear (in a subtle way) that it was Death that works there (not me).
Sorry.
Don't be sorry, it was an excellent piece of writing.
I think sometimes, a story needs to be read a couple or three times in order to see all the detail.
I got it too. Nice :)