Hey @folakere, your story amazed me and I am eagerly looking for upcoming parts of your story. You would be delighted to know that even I share the peculiar interest of writing ghost stories. Well, I just joined steemit and I was glad to read a ghost material like from which I learned a few lessons on writing.
Also,
I wrote one part of my thriller/horror story which I bet would excite you while reading. I hope you enjoy it.
Do read and upvote it if you have time from your busy schedule.
Here's the link:
https://steemit.com/suspense/@jaymehta/the-story-of-david-mayor-part-1
Thanks,
Regards,
Jay Mehta