Congratulation on launching your first alpha version! While it's early days, the idea is certainly solid.
Now, I have some question, a couple of suggestions.
Why not share some screenshots? This is the first reveal of the app. And, sure, people can click and see it, but a nice visual representation would make a more appealing proposition. I would also consider adding the link to at least one mention of it in the text.
The post was not as comprehensive as I would like. I often say that a blog post is a story. In this case, it's the story of you creating a Steem condenser for travel. Why do it? Where is it unique? How can it compete with the Tripadvisors and the Yelps?
Finally, while there were several issues of style and grammar in the post, there is one that bothered me in particular:
Each participant must have their own rating, so that the rest of the people could trust him without being personally aware of the person.
The male pronoun should not be default. It's excluding of female and non-binary readers, which I'm sure is the last thing you want to do. You could write around the pronoun, or use the singular they. But please don't use "him," unless you're talking about a specific male person, or you're also using "her" in the post for the same purpose and alternating.
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didic, thanks! I apologize for my English, google translate let me down..
I really didn’t want to call her "him" :)
As for the competition with Tripadvisors, I think this is the same as asking for example how Steemit can compete with Medium, just my opinion. This is a completely different approach to the product.
Until the end, I still do not see the final picture of the development of the application. Maybe this could be the DAO of travelers?
Yes, I'll think about the screenshots. But I especially do not want to make the application attractive, so that everyone would like it. I make it for those for whom the idea is really interesting.
Thanks for your review!
Thank you for your review, @didic!
So far this week you've reviewed 27 contributions. Keep up the good work!