RE: Particle physics @ Utopian-io - Designing an LHC search strategy for unraveling new phenomena

[kit.andres]

Thank you for the contribution. It's really interesting to see the big community and interest around the project and the series.

Keep up the good work!

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[lemouth]

Thanks for the report! Do you mind providing more information regarding "room for improvement"? This is very unclear to me.

I don't know if this is connected to this, but as I answered to many comments, a few things may sound obscure, but there are extra posts to read before this one which I took the decision not to repeat.

But please let me know. If there is room for improvement, I want to improve :)

[kit.andres]

Hi lemouth.
The "room for improvement" comment is related to your post format; although, the used language is clear and the format is consistent, there are some portions in the presentation that could look better:

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• Writing commands outside the general text can make reading even easier.

1. The command object1.dr(object2) allows us to evaluate....
2. through the command PHYSICS->Isol->JetCleaning(MyJets, MyElectrons, 0.2). This ...

These are some examples in which the commands have been including into the general text. I think that write commands in independent lines will let your post to looks much better.

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• Attached images can be used to separate big lots of text. This will make reading easier and allow the contribution to look more orderly. I think that two columns structure is not meeting this goal. Images look small and surrounded by a lot of text, and, in some cases, the text in the another column looks a little messy.

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These are small observations that can make your contributions look much better. I apologize for not having been sufficiently descriptive in my first comment. Your series is of quite quality and we are happy to support your project in Utopian.

[lemouth]

I agree with the two points (especially the first one). Thanks a lot for the return! I will think about it for the next episode and try to format it better. :)