Touched, the Very First Time...

in #verse9 years ago

baird.com - breakwater dam
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The tears flow like the deep water currents
No place for a dam to stop the torrents
The water looks clear through to see
The channels and rivulets steady
And with all the knowledge to build
Unlike wires to transmit electricity
Consort can't come contains veracity
My hope the wind whips frothy waves
Between boundless beauties it shaves
And if a wall is built all around it
By guild and tenacity raves without wit
Streams stagnant upon sea floors stayed
Like sweat pooled sheets juicing maid
Abandoned to lust and on the floor laid
Hope grows forth like thy splendorous raiment
Church crowns and a minister's arraignment
Wedded vows for all times sublime
Death us do part touched, the very first time

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Very good writing

love this poetry, I also write sometimes. This is my poem posted here on steemit. Hope you will enjoy it. https://steemit.com/life/@rocksg/from-the-desk-of-an-artist

Hello my friend
Post is great .. Thanks for sharing

Thanks my dear friend @mars9

Excellent poem dear friend @ jeff-kubitz, very beautiful, it causes me real pleasure to visit your blog.thanks for sharing these beautiful words

Much gratitude my dear friend @jlufer for your appreciation