Hey @davidkain, thank you for your story, I am a crime and mystery fan, that is why I enjoyed reading your story. Many different nations believe in dream catcher and in some houses you still find them, I love htem as deco and to tell the truth necer had any bad or good or true dreams, and I am really glad for that.
The style of your writing is good, it is easy to read through and to track your idea, it is not too overwehlming with description adn keeps reader really interested :)
Cheers, from Art-supporting blog @art-venture
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Very happy to hear you enjoyed it! :D
Yeah... dreams can go either way - they can be beautiful, or they can be the worst nightmares you've ever had.
But you never know 'til they happen ;D
Thank you!
I am often left wondering if I'm not paying enough attention to the little stuff and am omitting too much of the details... So this comment is very, very much appreciated! :D
You are really good, keep doing it, there are many mystery and sci-fi books but still your style is good, it catches the reader :)
Thanks! I try to include just enough of the details to provide the necessary background but not take away from the pace of the story. If I manage(d) to get that - I'm very, very happy! :D