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I do get it but still struggling with keeping it short, 5-6 words as you mentioned. I hope my skills get better in time tho. Practice and more practice.

I guess to make it shorter you'll need to let go of the whole telling a story in the title thing. Pick out the core theme and add two or three words about it, similar to what I've done in this post. Practice will get it to where you want it.

Will keep this advice in mind. Thank you!