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RE: The Cleaner - a short story in 3 parts- Part 2.

in #writing8 years ago (edited)

I think personally, It will be good for my writing. I've never been a huge fan of rules, but there are some simple things that I can correct which will allow me to more effectively tell the story. I don't think I will be putting everything I do through a review, going forward but i'm totally oblivious to much of the technical side of writing. I have my next few pages being reviewed right now, and it is helping me tighten up the more sloppy aspects of my work.

I think that I want to try a few short stories as well. Just as a pallet cleanser and to try different aspects of story telling. Short stories are fun for me because the characters are expendable I can do what I please with them, and those who are not, may end up staring in their own longer story.


Yeah I would love to do something like that with you. Once I put up a short story, if their are characters that I have not completely decimated, and you would like to feature them in a followup or back story, I'd get all giddy about that. After your permission of course, if I use one of yours, I'll just be sure I won't get them killed. :^P